Daisy’s We Never Knew

Posted: August 1, 2012 in Uncategorized
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stolen fingertips

touched daisy petals

with fingers that broke

on each clasp and pull,

they said it would not

be easy turning events

about,

memory shudders

thoughts fall

scattering upon the ground

being blown into corners

acquiring more dirt,

no matter how much you

wrap in bandages of solace

fractures sometimes do

not heal,

touch was the beginning

and it would be the end,

eyes touching eyes,

soul falling into sinkhole,

wasted words

cascade from sluice mouth,

an artist dwelled in that bony

box painting images of what

should of been,

idyll’s of conscious

creating images

yet she did not see herself

in these potraits,

colors on canvas

dense and thick,

he could step back

let the abyss grow

unbridged ,

already much had been

forgotten

so it became easier,

bourbon in paper bag

chocolates melted in their

box,

flowers awkward now bare

stemmed those daisy petals

scattered with the thoughts,

a restful swell filled his chest,

as he melted into another day.

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Comments
  1. artzent says:

    WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!

  2. george-b says:

    Grand poems, I couldn’t resist, I had to engage the “Reblog” button! Thanks for the read!

  3. george-b says:

    Reblogged this on euzicasa and commented:
    A wonderful poem, very tactile ” Eye touching eye”-what a metaphor!

  4. I love long, skinny poems with plenty of white space. Excellent presentation. I especially like these sections:

    “stolen fingertips
    touched daisy petals
    with fingers that broke”

    “eyes touching eyes,
    soul falling into sinkhole,”

    “bourbon in paper bag
    chocolates melted in their
    box,
    flowers awkward now bare
    stemmed those daisy petals”

  5. Robyn Lee says:

    Lovely Seadog… scattered daisies and melted chocolate … I know those fractures that do not heal well ~ much love xo

  6. Beautiful metaphors in this poem…you’ve accomplished a lot in this nice tight write!

  7. janehewey says:

    “bandages of solace” is wonderful. there is such potent poignancy here. I love, LOVE your last 5 lines and the way you reel it back in to a restful swell and another day. great poem.

  8. brian miller says:

    when you got to ‘so it became easier…’ i wanted to say no…easy is not always the best…felt the emotions running through this one…

  9. True, some fractures don’t heal or take a long time to heal after a painful memory ~ I also like the melting into the day and just letting chocolates melt and flowers fall ~

  10. Claudia says:

    i meant souls of course…

  11. Claudia says:

    tight emotions in this…tells a complete stories with giving us glimpses into its sould..
    yet she did not see herself
    in these potraits…is my fav in here as it sums the feeling up for me..

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