horsemen without horses
positioned in thought
on neural network,
frost of indignation
chilled hearts,
bathed in an absolute blue
that brought relief
to an unsatisfactory mind,
defeat can be seen
by different eyes,
as another victory
acceptance and letting go
shift in boundaries,
that can be so fluid,
concepts of original conflict
dispersed as fall leaves
to be looked at
not picked up,
awaiting after this
summer night
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a piece for the prompt
…..and another Russel Ray camping trip comes to an end………………..Hope all is well.
concepts of original conflict
dispersed as fall leaves
to be looked at
not picked up…nice chris…i really like this section, it speaks to me…nice bit on how perspective changes everything as well…
Quite enjoyed your poem.
I love how you captured the fluidity of the image with your words…
Well done!… I agree with Helen…
JJRod’z
.. ‘defeat can be seen by different eyes as another victory’ ~~~ so true! Nice writing.
fabulous poem.