Living Incidents

Posted: September 5, 2012 in Uncategorized
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horsemen without horses

positioned in thought

on neural network,

frost of indignation

chilled hearts,

bathed in an absolute blue

that brought relief

to an unsatisfactory mind,

defeat can be seen

by different eyes,

as another victory

acceptance and letting go

shift in boundaries,

that can be so fluid,

concepts of original conflict

dispersed as fall leaves

to be looked at

not picked up,

awaiting after this

summer night

http://magpietales.blogspot.co.uk/

a piece for the prompt

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Comments
  1. …..and another Russel Ray camping trip comes to an end………………..Hope all is well.

  2. brian miller says:

    concepts of original conflict

    dispersed as fall leaves

    to be looked at

    not picked up…nice chris…i really like this section, it speaks to me…nice bit on how perspective changes everything as well…

  3. slpmartin says:

    Quite enjoyed your poem.

  4. Tess Kincaid says:

    I love how you captured the fluidity of the image with your words…

  5. Well done!… I agree with Helen…

    JJRod’z

  6. Helen says:

    .. ‘defeat can be seen by different eyes as another victory’ ~~~ so true! Nice writing.

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