nudity dark and profound
thighs run with dregs of wine,
face and lips lift to light,
pour handful of tablets
into palm and fern fingers
from the cabinet,
her happening not vague or bland
she was on a road of melancholy thoughts
no guide or shelter,
emptied glass of bristle bent toothbrushes,
rinsed and drank,
clasped in different thoughts,
skin of breasts still dreaming
it was a blue shine happening,
she could not remember
if she locked handle on the door,
anger had stirred the piercing arrow
no horror in or upon her,
she now smiled,
he would be left with her frantic perfume
as returning to his job,
salesman dialing pointless nine to four,
ache and throbs descend,
she was not impulsive or feeble
the cafe had been a good place
where they had kissed in a moments flutter,
ease lifted torment
clarity cast it’s leaf litter,
in the sun she shall be now
assured of what went before,
be able to tell her friends
that shadow had gone,
her beauty could bite and gnaw
at the most innocent man
and score his heart with deepest feeling,
despite water and medicinal taste,
in her mouth salted peanuts,
close her eyes,
nourished by how jealousy mocks,
dresses and goes out,
covering those sky burnt eyes

…palm and fern fingers…
I imagine if she had a piano she could play the ‘blues’.
I’m here:
http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/10/sw-79-revelations-part-i.html
Sad and good !
Whoa! Dark and sad, so much anger, angst, disappointment. Hope lost. You convey it all well.
Wow. This line especially stands out to me: she was on a road of melancholy thoughts
Thanks Laurie hugs to you
i am glad she got up and got out…some really cool descriptives in this man..the sky burnt eyes…frantic perfume….cool trip as you tell the story man…
Thank you Brian i have been a bit erratic lately got a deadline to meet
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This is a very good poem, it’s images clash beautifully…
Long but worth it! Cheers to you, my friend