Lean against the letting go


like pressed garlic
creamy crushed
husk blown away,
i held her
forgetting the argument,
forgiveness and
playing with that
blonde hair
thinking of tomorrow

http://rustytruck.wordpress.com/2012/03/24/lean-against-the-letting-go-by-christopher-lawrence/

5 thoughts on “Lean against the letting go

  1. Excellent metaphor: “like pressed garlic creamy crushed husk blown away”

    The tender insides, almost liquid brokenness, mush. And the way you held her. I love this.

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