falling from her words
relentless sea against rocks
his heart strikes a tone

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Comments
  1. Intriguing metaphor in the last line! Beautiful!

  2. zongrik says:

    his heart became a musical instrument

    alive on subway senryu

  3. Ramesh Sood says:

    Very deep..little difficult for me to reach there..but then you have crafted it well.. God bless!!!

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