that light blue evaporated,

moisture particles

dried to nothing,

leaden grey replaced

with a burden to

bow shoulders,

oppressive in a way

that coherent thought

is lost,

cast glances to the

mountains ,

no illuminant offerings,

bench on lake shore

offers expansive views

that mean nothing,

as vile twists of

darker serpent has moved

in my heart,

thickening the beat

to a slow thrum

http://onesingleimpression.blogspot.co.uk/

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Comments
  1. markwindham says:

    vile twist of darker serpents … very good.

  2. chithankalai says:

    excellent// thanks

  3. brian miller says:

    def feel like the darkness is winning the day in this you know…robbing all the color…even the heart seems to be fading a bit…

  4. Harshad says:

    ‘as vile twists of

    darker serpent has moved

    in my heart,’

    Yes, nothing works with that serpent in.

    Excellent piece.

  5. David King says:

    I had to work a bit at this, but that’s all to the good so far as I’m concerned. I thoroughly enjoyed the reads (3). They have brightened a dull morning. – weatherwise!

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