Complex Power Output

Posted: May 11, 2012 in Uncategorized

clunky old home power

unit removed,

organic solutions

brochure provided

something new,

it arrived by cab

stepping out in

female form moving

into apartment,

going from room to room

analyzing small panels

with symbols,

her ability to send

from core radio waves,

fueling hot water

cooker and TV,

it cost a lot ,a finance

plan that stretched

twenty two years,

not unattractive,

and became relaxed

in her presence,

generating by way

of nanotechnology

and synthetic connective


i wanted to possess and

became troubled,

once overdone on wine

touched that form

and alarm sounded

power was cut for four days,

i had a business contract,

for the other a fee applied,

so i conceded and

let her control the home.

  1. ruchi jain says:

    A professional kind of poem,, different one..

  2. zongrik says:

    i like how you blend all kinds of generations of tech into one poem

    sonnet 40

  3. claudia says:

    oh goodness..those contracts, stretching 22 years and longer…and then the power cut when crossing the line…ha…def. has some sort of complexity to it..smiles

  4. Chazinator says:

    Some day, it may come to this. What I like about this is how you integrate the economic aspects with the technological. It’s the economic factors that limit your natural human reactions to the the entity. Stripped bare like this, the technological/economic bond becomes very clear and its effects on innate human behavior becomes restrictive and enslaving. Very interesting piece.

  5. brian miller says:

    some interesting thoughts here…haha on thepower being cut when you crossed the line…i def think AI and robotics opens a bit of a pandoras box for abuse you know…

  6. David King says:

    A lot of good things here. Entertaining and thought-provoking.

  7. hewesufa says:

    good morning dear reading mind of crawfish
    a fast forward poetic affair methinks
    i am intrigued by the style for which there is a fitting
    german word…schnoddrig…
    and the sense of humour streaks are finely put too
    ciao with a smile from hewesufa

  8. leahJlynn says:

    you where motivated when you wrote this, i could feel it as I read your it. thumbs up.

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