clunky old home power
unit removed,
organic solutions
brochure provided
something new,
it arrived by cab
stepping out in
female form moving
into apartment,
going from room to room
analyzing small panels
with symbols,
her ability to send
from core radio waves,
fueling hot water
cooker and TV,
it cost a lot ,a finance
plan that stretched
twenty two years,
not unattractive,
and became relaxed
in her presence,
generating by way
of nanotechnology
and synthetic connective
tissue,
i wanted to possess and
became troubled,
once overdone on wine
touched that form
and alarm sounded
power was cut for four days,
i had a business contract,
for the other a fee applied,
so i conceded and
let her control the home.
A professional kind of poem,, different one..
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i like how you blend all kinds of generations of tech into one poem
sonnet 40
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oh goodness..those contracts, stretching 22 years and longer…and then the power cut when crossing the line…ha…def. has some sort of complexity to it..smiles
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Some day, it may come to this. What I like about this is how you integrate the economic aspects with the technological. It’s the economic factors that limit your natural human reactions to the the entity. Stripped bare like this, the technological/economic bond becomes very clear and its effects on innate human behavior becomes restrictive and enslaving. Very interesting piece.
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some interesting thoughts here…haha on thepower being cut when you crossed the line…i def think AI and robotics opens a bit of a pandoras box for abuse you know…
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A lot of good things here. Entertaining and thought-provoking.
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Thank you David and have been looking at Pics and Poems
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good morning dear reading mind of crawfish
a fast forward poetic affair methinks
i am intrigued by the style for which there is a fitting
german word…schnoddrig…
and the sense of humour streaks are finely put too
ciao with a smile from hewesufa
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you where motivated when you wrote this, i could feel it as I read your it. thumbs up.
http://leah-jamielynn.typepad.com
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Thanks Leah appreciated
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