Moistened a poem for the (Monday Melting)

Posted: July 4, 2012 in Uncategorized
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sopping towel cool

lessened combustible bather,

slap of cold drew down

the heat,

heart still pounding

beneath saucer breasts,

a backhand

spread last of water

and suds as they spiralled

down the drain,

she has used many a riposte

to his passion,

samovar steamed,

naked arbitration

would have others askance,

their love had not softened

or bottomed out,

it remained resolute,

a crag ,a precipice

of dangerous desire

  1. bellesogni says:

    Oh yeah…

  2. rosemary mint says:

    Glad to have you join us this week!

    Great ending:
    “it remained resolute,
    a crag, a precipice
    of dangerous desire”

    I also really like these lines:
    “lessened combustible bather”
    “naked arbitration”

    Nice job! Thanks for sharing your poetic moisture with us. 🙂

  3. Yousei Hime says:

    Same words and yet completely different poem. Thanks for the visit and follow. I look forward to seeing you again.

  4. hobgoblin2011 says:

    Very cool flow here. Love the way you chose to use the word list here. Very effective. Thanks

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