In Places Other Than

Posted: August 10, 2012 in Uncategorized
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hydrangea aside in

a combed border,

petals pale in neutral soil,

she took a walk alone,

house behind,

sullen in it’s limestone

and thatch,

his note a promise

things had been fragile

since moving across

from the city,

words once murmured

not said anymore,

sunlight brought relief

slanted across her

drawing out that shadow,

he would be here later,

they would share a meal

bread and wine,

he had no other way of being

and it would be accepted,

as much as yielding

upon that mattress and brass


consuming the whole

  1. sarangirl says:

    This works on every level

  2. coconutspeak says:

    My goodness, I’m jealous. You, sir, are obscenely talented. Would love to get a comment or two (hint, hint) from you.

  3. Mohana says:

    Like like!!
    Love the opening lines, and esp his note a promise

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