grit sea wind blown falls
burning eye as winter comes
morning dims to pale
i am there again
dazzled under camera
she as flesh to me
of written resolution
from bosom to loin
i in extreme insolence
lunch; we eat sausage
pointing to the package there –
spicy, hot – he points
she thinks romance is alive
he cooks, she smiles – they dine
their crowded table
holds grandchild’s chair – history,
memories and love
(inspired by the fourth haiku – thanks Clawfish)
notes: the turkey sausage wasn’t really that hot. The grandchild’s chair is one of those that hang on the table…and well there still is too much stuff on the dining room table – 🙂
Wonderful Jules and i am glad i inspired you hope the rest of your weekend goes well
Chris, Your haiku are breathtaking.
Very nice 🙂
Hi Clawfish – these are all beautiful and strong – your imagery and voice is authoritative enough that one is taken even if not completely understanding at first – one reads again.
I found the last the most immediately compelling. It is such a great way to describe summer and invites one in.
The third -also spoke strongly to me – I don’t know if I got it, but I am a person endlessly making life-changing resolutions about my unforgiven flesh – they cascade soon enough! (I’m not sure if that’s what you meant but that’s what it called up for me.)
The first two are also beautiful – the fall, the camera/flesh was interesting – I kept thinking of in camera as in a room, which had an interesting echo. k.
You master a difficult form
Beautiful. I love Haiku. They are all lovely but the first is my fav, so full of vivid imagery.
Oh very nice one and all much enjoyed them