Pain Of Larks

Posted: September 25, 2012 in Uncategorized
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i have written to the lark
expressing my concern,
his voice a poignant song
from atop the lofty elm,
its a memory of a day
and a place i would rather forget,
being a bird of course
he cannot read,
so continues his incriminating
tearing open another

  1. kanzensakura says:

    wonderful! grabs me totally at the end.

  2. claudia says:

    ugh on tearing open another wound…wish he understood…good metaphor chris

  3. Bruce Ruston says:

    very nice a poetic shaking of a fist

  4. Nice one Chris ~ good to see 🙂

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