Oxidized bent into alternate shape
steel formed and defined
by us one fall,
the old green blanket
dragged from Buick trunk,
beyond the sink and realtor hours,
arranged a promise to meet,
gold on fingers no restraint,
cool mist spread
as if to muffle those who knew us,
temptations touch was strong,
discreet parked,
sparse tree’s that would be acquainted
with color again in spring,
tremors and kisses,
only sounds our clothes
and hands as they spoke in undressing,
flesh tinted by greasy window light,
all yearning was concentrated
upon each each other not in love
but temptation and lust,
to know each other briefly
not eternally,
hearts cluttered with other worlds
of length and importance,
this was an only moment,
for her it would evaporate,
for me as i stand
then bow touching bent steel,
i remember that truly
wanting something unable to attain,
love had been a receding tide
and new island found
but that too had been consumed and lost,
and i was left with a memory
beneath graying folds of hair
Great images and nice flow. Glad it was shared!
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Brilliant write!
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what an interesting picture…had not seen this one…love and lust definitiely changes things, like rust…things unable to attain got me a bit…sometimes they are for the better….or worse…
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Thank you Brian and strayed from the path with the pictures but Terry has been wonderful, all the best my friend
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Nice Chris, I’m glad you found an image to use. I always enjoy your poetry. I just love the way you wrap this one up also with, “I was left with a memory beneath graying folds of hair” – a beautiful sadness a sense of saudade. Again, well done.
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Thank you Terry i appreciate your words
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some nice heat in this first part and def. well captured atmosphere..the receding tide and new island found..love the reflectiveness in the second part about the things we gain and lose..ever changing…
(on a side note.. if you use a pic by terry that is not in the dVerse post collection, you should ask if it’s ok with him, usually i think it is but to be sure, it would be good to ask him..)
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Thanks Claudia and Terry has been great about the images and likes the results, hope all is good for you
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