linnaeus said i was of the breast,
mammal,
others said
homunculus being of man,
i am structure labels and description
hominid not pongid,
erect bipedal classified and arranged
my own name of inconsequence
i am myself living with fossil ancestors,
last of a kind,
pan troglodytes and pan paniscus
my shadow shape and form,
pan feeder and fertility
of these as much as well
not so much as a deity
but origin being
vessel of twenty three chromosomes
and passion to extend the lineage,
being morphologically comparable
to those of saggital crest,
linnaeus believed in sex and the line
as with his botanica
sexual with bridal beds
as perfumed and scented as passion be
now a dancing self deity
procreation and self extension,
finding the mate
passion raw astounding the stars
grunts of elemental exhaustion
a galaxy of cellular construction
swirl compete and fertilize,
i am mammal
feeder of the breast natures nurturer
and wonder of flesh
Wow, I adored this and enjoyed where you went with the prompt. It hooked me at the beginning and only got better from there. Thanks so much for joining us!
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Anna thank you what you gave us to work with was amazing i have always written poetry but never worked much with form so i find the prompts insightful and interesting and a challenge so again thank you for giving me a push
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‘i am myself living with fossil ancestors’ – excellent line… and, yet, again another fine offering… smiles..
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Thank you for your words and visiting
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yes. nature is a curious constellation at all scales inside and out.
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The whole thing is great, but I really love this line: “passion raw astounding the stars” And from here down through to the end is my favorite section. Excellent.
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Thank you Jasmine appreciated
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Love the language you used in this. A great experimental piece!
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Thank you Sheila it was the first response my mind made
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a dancing self deity…i find that a rather truthful yet sobering line there…after that is a pretty cool fanciful dance yourself…love the passion, the grunts…galaxy of cellular is a cool phrase as it blends the immense and in the small…
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Thank you Brian all the best
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‘…but origin being…vessel of twenty three chromosomes….’ Love those lines!
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Thanks Steven for looking in
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truly fascinating.
i loved this piece:
not so much as a deity
but origin being
vessel of twenty three chromosomes
and passion to extend the lineage,
being morphologically comparable
to those of saggital crest,
perfectly worded.
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Miriam thank you and all the best to you
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