the clock as a passenger
looks with helpless hands,
as time often cast upon
the rocks of mans momentum
stalls past and present collide,
memory that flattering
cinemagraph of the synaptic’s
relays something other than was,
short breaths come
falter far from the heart,
we as living in this space
age,
flesh wither
wrinkles cluster and deepen
bones become fragile,
yet we strive to linger on
place ourselves as memory on others
so that it is not in vain
even a fragile hand held
is a memory,
cruel tides wash through time
that pull and toss you about,
so steady you remain
until that moment,
that flesh becomes shell
and memory is a function
of recollection,
not ready
it happens
now it is time to accept
and face your own reflection
again
we are transient things
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memory, loss, grief, existence….
it’s all here.
good job.
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“Cruel tides wash through time” Now that is one amazing line filled with so much meaning. Loved this
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Those first five lines, incredible, like magic. I’m so glad I got to read another one of your poems. The clock as a passenger with helpless hands, man, that’s timeless and alone like, almost cold like. Thanks.
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Lovely share specially these lines:
that flesh becomes shell
and memory is a function
of recollection,
not ready
it happens
I like the ending line of looking at one’s reflection ~
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Thank you i am glad you enjoyed it
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yet we strive to linger on
place ourselves as memory on others
so that it is not in vain…those three lines encompass this poem well for me…the flesh becoming shell…the looking at your own reflection as you close is powerful too….
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Thank you Brian
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time to accept your own reflection again.. cool closure.. just watched a film about time and this resonated within as i read.. not so easy to let time go…
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this followed a dream i had the other night about my dad who died last month, so thank you Claudia
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