cloud closed eyelids
break down
frustration bites,
from the hearth of the desert
to letters written on a distant bed,
bleached warm animals move
still connected to womb,
she smelled the colors,
and aeroplane’s shipwrecked
in the sky
poured contents on golden wings,
there was a pirate sea
somewhere beyond her once
found intimacy now left,
forgotten sand buried
yellow dune sea,
hominid apes search
closed eyelids sealed
not with tears,
just a low iridescence of pain
on the weight of the wind,
she remained infirm
on the mattress
her spine left damaged footprints
yet something lifted
drunk on air
feast on breast before
dissolved with fire
palm fronds part,
as she sought his lips again
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The characters built here sync with the colours offered in the frame! Nice work
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Great end here. Sounds like a happy end after a trip to a place one shouldn’t visit
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Thanks Bjorn my mind is folding around the prompt and loving it will be looking on yours soon
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cool…rather surreal story telling….the plane wreck…the hominids or apes…the taking of her there in the end..interesting…planet of the apes run amuck…
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This prompt has activated some thoughts might post some links in the comments as i am writing more, thanks for looking in and all the best my friend
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