tone dialing remedy
better than those gulls
filling the air with
pull of sea,
encroaching on ears
cochlea tremors
insistent and provocative,
life needed to be in boxes
without labels,
identifying was not the issue
it was separation,
the telephone a child
cradled under chin
suckling on words,
spectacles perched with vertigo
on top of a crooked nose,
lips always poised
to speak but that was of
no consequence as sound
could carry further than voice,
a scream long prolonged
that was what pain brought,
gulls worse than cicadas
blood curled into fingers
then returned leaving them white
and grasping
still nothing,
slit your veins and fill a boat
with a swilling legacy
of something that
should of been,
letting gulls fall
bathing feathers redder
This is really like painting with words..
Loved the
spectacles perched with vertigo
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thanks Bjorn
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There is such a sense of foreboding in this piece, which is perfectly realised in the line “slit your wrists and fill a boat.”
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thank you Tony all the best
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tight images…love the telephone stanza esp…
the telephone a child
cradled under chin
suckling on words..so cool
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Thanks Claudia hope all is well and the flight was ok all the best
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That is quite a closing – bathing feeders redder – I like the pull of the sea ~
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Grace thank you with hugs
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whew…nice…really cool phrasing in this…the telephone a child under chin…that was a very cool section….the unlabled boxes, cause thats not the problem…another nice one…
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Again Brian thank you
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