5 Haiku

Posted: November 19, 2012 in Uncategorized
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fall has a reason

a certain color missing

all gold is for kings



mime as memory

as forgiven by nature

under silver beech



on high bough he calls

to the love lain bare below

lusts declaration done



a child’s playhouse

an architect delivers

between the branches



as thunder tears sky

i cower deep inside me

lightning splits tree


  1. These are wonderful. Love the last two.

  2. Grace says:

    I specially like the first two stanzas ~ Great to see you writing in this form ~

  3. johncoyote says:

    Thank you for the amazing five haiku. The fourth one was my favorite.

  4. cheryl says:

    Such a variety, well done !

  5. Bruce Ruston says:

    Very nice collection you have here

  6. mobius faith says:

    Nice work. #1 and #5 really do it for me.

  7. festivalking says:

    I love the last one 🙂

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