smoky auburn hair,

eyes shallow closed,

music permeated

the atmosphere,

drawn by the

colluding sound

of a saxophone,

dew down cleavage,

exalted breathing

a rapture,

unraveled my conscious

guiding me to


  1. markwindham says:

    Liking it, a lot. Love the sound of the sax and the way you portray it.

  2. poemsofhateandhope says:

    ‘dew down cleavage’ sorry for poor spelling!

  3. poemsofhateandhope says:

    Very sensual and seductive piece here, the smoky hair, the music in the background, the few down cleavage- phew! Really liked how this tumbles down the age in the short form….nice economy of words….kind of like a rapidly beating heart in a rapture….just perfect for this

  4. Very sensual and seductive, nicely done.

  5. claudia says:

    big smile..i’m playing the saxophone myself and listening to someone, playing it really good takes me to different places…to solace, to madness, to places i don’t even have names for and always leaves me burning and with the longing for more…

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